Forgotten in Time

by QuietDreamer   Oct 21, 2007


Walking down the frosted path
Trying to escape my life
Full of the ones I hate
And the ones I love

The people pass on by
As I'm forgotten in time
Without even a glance back
They go to their warm havens and sugar-coated lives.

Tears slowly flow down my frostbitten cheeks
As a family goes on ahead,
So happy and merry as can be
Untouched by reality

The sky I thought was clear and blue
But now's a tinted shade of gray
Ominous clouds entomb the sun
Casting me back into darkness.

True vision goes black
As time ignores me
Looking for a new life
Looking for a new me

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  • 16 years ago

    by Britt

    Hey this is a really good poem...
    keep on writing...
    i like it...

    XOXOXO
    Britt

  • 16 years ago

    by you will never forget me

    This is really amazzingg. I like it lots...yer a really good writer. =] <3

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulLetdown

    OK. so that guy who said u could do better doesnt know n e thing. u did an amazing job. considering ur a guy and most guys dont write. so keep it up. u should right more!!! 5/5 really good job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Beautiful Disgrace

    It was full of emotion and I think you did a good job. Keep up the good work.

  • 17 years ago

    by Nikko McMorbid

    I won't praise you. Yeah it's good, and it's full of emotions. But you can still be better. Believe me.

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