I won't praise you. Yeah it's good, and it's full of emotions. But you can still be better. Believe me.

It was full of emotion and I think you did a good job. Keep up the good work.

OK. so that guy who said u could do better doesnt know n e thing. u did an amazing job. considering ur a guy and most guys dont write. so keep it up. u should right more!!! 5/5 really good job!

This is really amazzingg. I like it lots...yer a really good writer. =] <3

Hey this is a really good poem...
keep on writing...
i like it...

XOXOXO
Britt