by Cooper Oct 21, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
I took ... her virginity, as though it was not already taken, |
Wow... I'm speechless. You had me from the first line, and continued to amaze me through the whole piece. This is completely brilliant, every line is filled with great descriptions and emotions. Flawless piece, outstanding and so captivating. I love your choice of words here and the imagery that you created that simply crawled in the mind through the whole piece. Truly brilliant! |
I really liked this poem. |