You Picked Me (contest)

by RobinAnn13   Oct 21, 2007


You watched me from far away
you were looking for someone to care
for someone to fix your bleeding heart
and for someone to always be there

Whether you knew it or not
I already cared for you
I was here, I'd fix your heart
maybe you'd care for me too

Then one day we met
and as you smiled I could see
that out of all the other girls
To fix your heart, you picked me

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  • 17 years ago

    by Blissful

    Aww this was sweet, cute and filled with so much emotion! The flow was great and I could follow along effortlessly. Well done *5/5*

  • 17 years ago

    by Bloomed Rose

    Very good poem! i loved it. short and sweet
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Teria

    "I'd Fix Your Heart . . . Maybe you'd care. . . "

    ^^ I would've fixed you heart,
    then maybe you'd care. . . "

    Other than that one minor thing, it was pretty good. I think it could have had a bit more to it, a bit longer, you know. But, it is a good poem, and even without that extra few stanzas or so, it's a good poem. (: Sweet as heck, too.

    Keep it up, darling.
    4|5

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