"I'd Fix Your Heart . . . Maybe you'd care. . . "

^^ I would've fixed you heart,
then maybe you'd care. . . "

Other than that one minor thing, it was pretty good. I think it could have had a bit more to it, a bit longer, you know. But, it is a good poem, and even without that extra few stanzas or so, it's a good poem. (: Sweet as heck, too.

Keep it up, darling.
4|5

Very good poem! i loved it. short and sweet
5/5

Aww this was sweet, cute and filled with so much emotion! The flow was great and I could follow along effortlessly. Well done *5/5*