by Dots Oct 22, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
new love
My heart beats faster as I ponder my intentions. |
by homebound
I have to say it builds up and builds up like a love poem, but then turns into humor/comedy! nicely done! keep it up |
ItS aN interestinG feelingS... donE verY nicelY... mY deepesT regardS 4 yR expressionS... 5/5 keeP iT uP anD writE morE.... |