by NashvilleBlues Oct 22, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Cold rails with dirt in between, nothing but darkness up ahead. |
I won't praise you. Yeah it's good, and it's full of emotions. But you can still be better. Believe me. |
by Virginia
Great poem. I can see where you're coming from. The emotion you put into it, is amazing. When you're reading this, you feel yourself in the eyes of the "I" person. Keep up the great work. |