Comments : Mad World

  • 17 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    This was wonderfully written, and so true, too.

    "Do not be the poison,
    The world has come to drink,
    Walk out of the shadows,
    Use your mind to think."

    This was my favourite stanza. I loved the reference to poison, as I feel that it strongly portrays the way our world has become. A poisonous fix that we can't stop ourselves from engulfing.

    Very well done.