Wow, it was what you said it was going ot be lol. So many rhymes lol. I thought it was unusual and preety well thought out. Working for a good rhyme often takes a whoooole lot of time, you obviously have it mastered lol. Was great work xxx alex xxx

Insane, but excellent rhyming! The message was on point and the flow was awesome! 5/5

Wow that was fantastic. Each line was full of meaning and always complimented the next line. Your flow wa great and you really used alot of creativity in there. Excellent work. Defuinite 5/5

Woww!! great jobb cutiee, your definitly like a rhyme master or somethingg haha, that was such an enjoyable poemm, i lovedd itt... keep writingg foreverr dont ever stopp 5/5 from mee

amazingg workk :] xoxox lovee youu

Loved the rhymes. You must be very talented poet!!!

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Nice. I'm glad I read this 1 first b/c I'm hooked now and must read more :) Imagery must be your thing - you're fantastic at it. The ending could not have been better.

The only thing that I would change is just a small grammar thing -

Golden webs we weave, hearts heave with grieve,

I would change the word "with" to "and"

The poem was a very good read, thanks!

~Tara

Nice. I'm glad I read this 1 first b/c I'm hooked now and must read more :) Imagery must be your thing - you're fantastic at it. The ending could not have been better.

The only thing that I would change is just a small grammar thing -

Golden webs we weave, hearts heave with grieve,

I would change the word "with" to "and"

The poem was a very good read, thanks!

~Tara

On the pain it brings, it sings....
I do that lol!
I love your poem, it reflects my own situation atm.
The words and the rhyme are excellent.
No less than a 5/5 for you!

Best wishes,

Ingrid

That was very adorable. When I read it, I couldn't help but notice a fairytale tone in my voice lol. Your vocabulary is flows extremely well and the words to this poem lift off of my tongue.

5/5

beautiful piece :)

Hey this poem iz amazing your rhyming was mad and the poem flowed really well i think the poem was great 5/5 keep it up

What can I say??This is one of the most creative and mindnumbing poems I have ever read.I am truly speechless.Usually I have at least a little something to critique but this time I don't.I can't say anything halfway bad about this poem.It was awesome.What more can I say?5/5 for sure.

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My name is christina. I am a poetry analysist and you have a great talent. I have been on this site for years and I havnt found one poem that has taken my breath away. Now that you have a passion and a talent and it needs to be recognized. If you can write me back I would like to speak to you about your talent. Let me know if you are interested.

I really like this poem. It took my breath away. It has good rhyming and the flow is amazing.

Great job!!!

5/5

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That almost turned into a t twister. The work was good and the description very well done I gave it a 5 great work. Plot121

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Wow... this is one of the most beautiful love poems I've read on this site... It is so amazing, so flawless. Whole piece has excellent rhymes and greatly created, truly vivid imagery. I could get lost in all emotions that you portrayed here, every stanza is filled with feelings and superb descriptions.
Excellent poem from the beginning to the end, I like everything about it.
Keep up!
5/5 from me

Great piece you got there.. the wording and vocabulary was captivating.. i love the thought and how you used the caged bird.. imagery that makes the reader think.. like it a lot ^_^ you really have talent.. thanks for writing a piece that i enjoyed!

~angel~

Great job, keep it up Mr great..

Awesome work!! i loved the flow and energy of this! wow! great message and feelings put into this! wow again! lol keep it up! :o]