ThiS youR 1sT writinG.. (i beleivE).... iF sO, i aM thE 1sT tO reaD, 1sT tO ratE anD thE 1sT tO commenT foR thiS lovelY piecE oF writinG thaT gavE mE endlesS joynesS...

Considering that it takes a writer and a half to put together an all rythym poem, truth be told that was an excellent attempt.
there is great quality in your writing and i look forward to reading more of your poems.
take care
*-Sarah-*
x.o.x

This is really goodo ! =D
i like the ryhmes and the flow =D

xx

Amazing poem,
very beautiful,
keep it up =)

This is a very amazing poem. I really loved it. 5/5

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Your love poems are simply beautiful, you have a lot of talent. Keep your pen to the paper :) *5/5*

Wonderful love poem filled with passion and beauty. The imagery was breathtaking and the flow was flawless. Well done *5/5*

WOah! Im blown away! this was ttly... Breathtaking! tnx 4 the comment!