Luckiest Man

by FridusBlueheaven   Oct 22, 2007


Title : Luckiest Man
Written By : Fridus Blueheaven

For the luckiest man,
I maybe don't know you, don't even know your face
For the one who could make the girl I loved amazed
Please love her more than any man in this world can do
She's the most precious girl in earth, believe me it's true

For the luckiest man,
You are definitely better than me so she picked you
And I hope that you could make all her dreams come true
Undefined situation, times get harsh and she's still the one
Believe me, she's even warmer than the light of the sun

For the luckiest man,
Please taking care the girl that lately I have ever loved
Hundred times I've tried and she's still what I'm dreaming of
But you're the only one who can have her heart for real
And you'd better believe me that a girl like her is perfect deal

For the luckiest man,
Everyday I pray that she could be a lot luckier than you
Treat her so right and be a place for her to run onto
And it's too bad for me that I could never have chance
But, does it good that you're the only one to hold her hands?

For the luckiest man,
When she needs you, be trustworthy and don't you disappear
When she wants to say words, and it's you the one who to hear
So please don't you ever let her shed her little diamond tear
Would you be the one who'd be there to catch all her fear?

For the luckiest man,
I'll be looking forward for happiness you'd give to her
And I also pray that your love and hers will last forever
From now on I'll stop looking at those closing doors
Wish that someday I could ever have a girl like yours

2007 Blueheaven Entertainment (c)

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  • 15 years ago

    by lost in lovee

    This poem isz amazinqq!

  • 17 years ago

    by Blissful

    This has to be my fave by you! The powerful and meaningful emotion you wrote with was flawless and beautiful. I loved how even though you lost your love to another, you were not bitter about it but rather you just wanted her to be happy. Well said. I loved your phrase "diamond tears" it was just amazing. Well done *5/5*

  • You expressed the feeling really well. It was very beautiful. Great job. 5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 17 years ago

    by Breeeezie

    This is beautiful and true.. great feelings and words!!!!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica Evelyn Maxwell

    Amazing yet again,
    beautiful rhymes,
    awesome topic.
    so true as well.
    keep it up =)