My morning star

by advicesoft   Oct 22, 2007


She came like the morning star,
lightning the darkness of my night,
showing me the goods of life,
giving me another life.

soon came a day,
when clouds were in my way,
and i woke up just to say,
my morning star has gone away,
yes my morning star has gone away,
to brighten someone else's life.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Fading Memories

    Such a sad poem..... I hope you find another morning star or your morning star comes back.....

    one day

    Nadia

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Joshua Grider

    I gave you an amzing5/5 100/100 if i could.
    lol
    please return the favor. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    Really sad poem. I'm sorry for your loss.

    5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 18 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    ThiS youR 1sT writinG.. (i beleivE).... iF sO, i aM thE 1sT tO reaD, 1sT tO ratE anD thE 1sT tO commenT foR thiS lovelY piecE oF writinG thaT gavE mE endlesS joynesS...

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