Comments : The Past

  • 17 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    "Every night before I sleep,
    Something deep within begins to creep.
    Unknown feeling swells from inside,
    That will soon show my real side"

    These lines really hit me because I can relate. This is truly an excellent poem. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Estefania

    Very well written!

  • 15 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    This is a really powerful. I loved it. I felt so much in this. Great job. You have an amazing talent. keep it up. Shanik