Wow! Please keep writing too, thanks for the comment on one of my poems.

Nice! This is a beautiful poem - the structure and wording was good. Keep it up :)

Ally. x

Omg this poem reminds me of what i do every nite, mhmm someone really special to me died, and its been years and year but i still stay up everynite crying my self to sleep tryin to figure out why and i talk to him and stuff sounds a bit odd but i do.
mhmm i really like it
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nice work
xx

Really nicely written poem of sadness and loss. It's a shame the content is so despairing, I (like most people) am concentrating on the content rather than the writing ability.

~Content~
Full of emotion and you are able to tell immediately that this piece is written straight from the heart, no pretention or misgivings about it. Such a sad story being portrayed, really forces the reader to connect to it, almost feeling guilty if they stop reading.

~The Poem~
I love how vivid the imagery is in this and the last stanza is simply a show-stopper. Reasonably good use of rhyme throughout although the rhyme scheme seems to falter a touch in the 5th stanza.
My main concern with this piece is the structure.. seems to knock the flow off the poem a little bit. You didn't really stick to any kind of structure with regards to the lines within a stanza.

~Overall~
You definitely have very good writing ability, that shines through in abundance. I think it might be a good idea for you to attempt to write something in a set structure (Sonnet/Haiku/Licentia Rhyme <Some common ones).
Definitely keep up the really imaginitive imagery - works very nicely.

Any bad comment here, isn't intended to offend.

A beautifully sad story, accentuated by wonderful imagery.

~Pete.

Loved this poem brilliant xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Awww soooo cute i love it<33