Wow, wow, wow... You should be proud on your self this is beautiful! I love everything about it, you wrote it with such power and it has some special, great, tone. Topic is also excellent and I enjoyed in every line, you expressed emotions on fantastic way. Well done

Once again just amazing. This is very true, i think about things like this a lot, but there is always someone around to remind me that there are still some people around that bring that sense of helping and lending a hand back to life. There is still a lot of good in the world and a lot to live for if you can manage to look past the greed and voilence that is part of the world, there is still a wee ray of sunshine around the corner. However great poem and it does ring true. There is no denying things were simpler before. Great work. You definately have a knack of getting me thinking. Take care.

Kelly
xx

Oh how true....sometimes it's too sad and depressing just to step outside anymore. Only hearing crying and sirens. What a tragedy. This earth needs more help than any man could give. Wonderful piece. Keep up the amazing work.
~Midnight Sun
Btw- I have a new abuse poem...it comes from the viewpoint of a woman and not a child but you still might like it...It's called "Broken Ballerinas Land on Their Toes". Hope you like it :)