Uncontrolled Love

by gack60   Oct 22, 2007


As I looked in your eyes, I saw the pain that you feel,
Your heart is broken by the love that you felt for me,
You keep on talking or you'll know that your feelings are real.

You keep me guessing, even when I know what you really think.
I watch your sorrow, and I see it stricken there through your eyes
We try to kiss but thats when your heart starts to sink.

I don't care what they say, I'm in love with you,
People tell me to leave, that you're doing me wrong,
I only stay so you know that my feelings are true.

When you need me I'm here, I'm always by your side,
Through the good and the bad, i'll be here for you,
When you don't want me, it just eats me up inside.

When I stand by your side, I feel nothing but love,
It's a love that is true, and I just wish you could see,
That i'll be here until the angels take me up above.

I want you all night, and even all through the day,
You're really special to me, I can't help how i feel,
I can't understand how you can make me feel this way.

I just want you to know, that ill always be here,
When you need me just call, i'll come running to you,
Ill always be true, devoted and sincere.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Marissa Marzano

    Fantastic!
    great poem
    you have a wonderful talent
    it touched me..
    well done.

    xx
    Marissa

  • Aww, very sweet poem. Sounds like you really love this girl. The flow was really nice. You have a great poem. Keep up the good work. 5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 17 years ago

    by Jackie

    I loved this poem, so sweet and heartfelt, brought a lump to my throat

  • 17 years ago

    by azii

    FANTASTIC JOB!!!
    I love it it's amazing.
    It's so emotional and meaningful that makes it perfect. Very enjoyful to read.
    5/5
    Thanks for the comment bte :)

    Keep up the wonderful job!
    TC

  • 17 years ago

    by Faith Gifford

    GREAT JOB. I love it. You did an AWESOME job. I wish I could write something that meaningful. Keep writting like this. Keep up the GREAT job. 5/5.