Im so lost without you

by VYXSIN   Oct 22, 2007


There you are again
and we're fighting like always
i never wanted to hurt you
but i guess now we have no go our seperate ways

Your so stupid
you brought me that ring
but now that your gone
it doesnt mean a thing

i thought you loved me
but one night out of the blue
you just said im sorry its over
but i need you!

Then you go and get drunk
with your stupid friend
just jump in the car
with your life you want to end

Your speeding, your drunk
your so messed up inside
then all of a sudden you crash
your bearly alive

But now nothing can stop
my bleeding broken heart
i thought you said you loved me
you said it from the start

i dont know what to do now
or how to stop the pain
the knife is always beckoning me
and its driving me insane

theres nothing i can do to help you
just sit and night and cry
i dont know what to do and its stupid
it seems your love was a lie

but now all i can say is i love you
nothing will ever stop the pain
but now that your gone
i cant loose you all over again

I love you so much
and i never wanted to let you go
there was so much more to this life
that you needed to be showen

I dont know what to do now
there isnt anything i can do
im so lost without you here
josh, i bloody love you

*this poem is half true, my boyfriend of seven months dumped me in a txt, then went off with his mate and got drunk, went for a drive and crashed, he is still here, but it feels like ive lost him.

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  • 17 years ago

    by nikki

    I thought it was a good piece. there were a few mistakes and i think you need to put them into microsoft word processor and do a spell check.

    just sit and night and cry
    should be
    just sit at night and cry

    but apart from that it was a very sad piece. 4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I=I

    your=you're

    I really enjoyed the emotion and depth in this piece, it was beautifully portrayed, and writtn so beautifully, and filled with such elegance.

    "Is still here but it feels like I've lost him."

    ^^ He's a drunk driver. He isn't worth thinking about.

  • 17 years ago

    by loviin hym

    AWW THATS VEERY GOOOOD

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