AWW THATS VEERY GOOOOD

I=I

your=you're

I really enjoyed the emotion and depth in this piece, it was beautifully portrayed, and writtn so beautifully, and filled with such elegance.

"Is still here but it feels like I've lost him."

^^ He's a drunk driver. He isn't worth thinking about.

I thought it was a good piece. there were a few mistakes and i think you need to put them into microsoft word processor and do a spell check.

just sit and night and cry
should be
just sit at night and cry

but apart from that it was a very sad piece. 4/5