Very dark and creepy 5/5

Excellent! Very well written piece from you.

Radiates the dark vibe that I've come to love in poetry :) Very deep and intricate too.

Keep up the good work.

Wow, great poem. Its dark, yet very awesome. Its creepy, but I like it. Great job.

5/5

Keep up the good work.

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Ohhhh...i like it...very creepy dark and strong....very powerful and well written....keeep it up!!!! 5/5

Holy moly, you'd think you've died before! I really like the way you used words that people use all the time in poems, but you made them sound new again. I think this is a great poem. =]

This is a real good piece of work, the language was really well worded. xxx alex xxx

This poem is written with such amazing imginary and captivating choice of words... I was blown away by the intense vocab and the enchanting image that is potrayed in this poem...

A beautiful read...definitely 5/5 from me...

Mm. i love the words you chose. they are so vivid. the last line was a toe curler. it was just so strong. the whole poem was. =]
nicely done.

because it's not quite my cup of tea id give it the average of my 4 into that five you have. i think that would be more precise. [like what i think you truly deserve.]

=] i hope that wasn't insulting.

and thanks for the comment.