This really captures the deep angst and sadness of the sometimes futility of life. I think many can relate to this type of despair. But getting through the rough, unbearable moments of life make one stronger in the long run. Though still sad, the end does contain a note of hope. Meanwhile, I've found that writing can be the best form of self therapy and healing. Just keep this on paper and out of reality! Things change, things get better, even if we don't always see it right away. This is a very honest and soul baring piece.

Peace, poetry & Power,

Gary Jurechka

Wow! Very nice poem you got there... A lot of pleasure... 5/5