by ALEX Oct 22, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Break out your best fake smiles. |
What a unique poem! I really enjoy that you thought outside the conventional box here. My favorite line was "four crocodile tears will fall from his eyes"--such great imagery! |
by Hurtingsoul
As the saying goes "some of the best poems are short" and this is exactly what it is. very well done the first stanza was the best. by the way are you a shakesphere fan? other than that great job |