Very hmmm at first I didn't like it but the way you summed the whole thing up was very well done great job on a fantastic finish Plot121

I like to take note on the beautiful flow and rythm this poem has...nicely done. it seems like you are a genius in short poems which usually are the ones with the most meaning. the last 2 lines are priceless and very sincere
amazing job keep it up
Take Care
xHSx

You're very honest and direct throughout this poem. 5/5

She's timeless, yet forever changed.
A pretty face; a mind, derranged.
AMAZING LINES.
Great flow, easy to read and understand. very emotive. very well written.
xx
Taegan Emily