A heartfelt poem.... I don't know how that must feel but your poem is very sad :(
One day I hope that you'll find a guy who'll love you and take care of you and not dump you like him
Anyways very heartfelt and touching poem

5/5
Nadia

"streaked my " << streak*

I liked the poem.
The emotion was great.
The flow was a bit off, but I think that was because of the syllable count and stanza breaks.

Maybe try more evened out lines and more evened out stanzas.

other than that you did a wonderful job. (:
5.5