I cannot trace my mind back a lot, |
UGH!! |
Wow...you have talent up the wazoo...keep it up....very very good!!!!!!! |
by Wallace
Excellent but I think it had too much of a story line, it didnt really feel like I was readint a poem. But it was very creative and the imagery was fantastic. And the lines blended together. Excellent job. Definite 5/5 |
by Robert
There was so much great description that it kinda got in the way with the message you were trying to convey. I loved the images but I lost sight of the message or it was very hazy Plot121 |
by barbara
This is so beautiful! its like nothing ive ever read before and i loved it. keep up the great work. 5/5 |
by twistedlover
Wow.... you sir are a very very good writer as you know how to express your words and make one feel as if they are experiencing what you are. |
Oh my goodness, that brought me to tears. I love it, i don't know what else to say. you use the most beautiful of imagery, it's just brilliant. |
This is easily one of the best poems i have ever read.....it is a brilliant pieces. keep just the beautiful work. this is going into my fav. |