Comments : The Only Mistake.

  • 17 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    I cannot trace my mind back a lot,
    but if my memory serves me well..
    I don't normally say that a poem is beautiful.
    Here's one of the exceptions I will make.
    This poem was unbelievably wonderful.
    Everything came together so perfectly.
    Overall Rating: 7.0/5 [special rating]

  • 17 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    UGH!!
    I tried nominating this poem.
    IT WONT LET ME.
    Gah. When it starts working..
    I will go ahead and do so.
    But until then!!
    I'll do something daring..
    and secretive!! :]

  • 17 years ago

    by Melvin LeVeque

    Wow...you have talent up the wazoo...keep it up....very very good!!!!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Wallace

    Excellent but I think it had too much of a story line, it didnt really feel like I was readint a poem. But it was very creative and the imagery was fantastic. And the lines blended together. Excellent job. Definite 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Robert

    There was so much great description that it kinda got in the way with the message you were trying to convey. I loved the images but I lost sight of the message or it was very hazy Plot121

  • 17 years ago

    by barbara

    This is so beautiful! its like nothing ive ever read before and i loved it. keep up the great work. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by twistedlover

    Wow.... you sir are a very very good writer as you know how to express your words and make one feel as if they are experiencing what you are.

  • 17 years ago

    by DeadandBleeding

    Oh my goodness, that brought me to tears. I love it, i don't know what else to say. you use the most beautiful of imagery, it's just brilliant.
    DnB

  • 16 years ago

    by YourThe ReasonIDiedTonight

    This is easily one of the best poems i have ever read.....it is a brilliant pieces. keep just the beautiful work. this is going into my fav.

    5/5