Now, I haven't read many collabs, but I have to say - this is the best I ever have. I'm presuming you each wrote one stanza? I loved it. I loved how it moved from one's POV to the other. It showed the love and sorrow felt from both sides.

Beautifully done, both of you.

This is pretty good I especially like the line "I wish that this war would end, because the end is overdue"