by Roxie Oct 22, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
new love
I can't believe it, |
by A l y s s a
I agree with Zeenat. More words can completely transform the entire outcome of the poem. And remember, not all poetry must rhyme. Try using more 'meaningful' words, you know? Deeper, with more emotion = bigger impact. :) Hope all goes well for you. |