Don't care

by xxSuicidalxx   Oct 22, 2007


Stab my heart
yeah go ahead, rip it apart
shoot me in the head
keep doing so till I'm dead
cut open my flesh
cause you know best
beat me till i bleed
until the blood gets in my eyes so i cant see

I don't care what you do to me
Kill me if you please
I have no self respect
I'd be better off dead

I don't want to live
I have nothing to give
so stab me in the heart
yeah, go ahead...
I don't care
if you tear me apart

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  • 17 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    I liked this poem. There was a mistake in the first stanza. It would look better if you fixed it. Great job though.

    4/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 17 years ago

    by The Pessimistic Peabody

    Powerfully apathetic, short but meaningful, pratically bleeding feeling in every line. Some rhymes seemed a bit forced but all in all an interesting write. Left me wondering...5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by abcede

    Intense! Very much so! If you're looking for any type of suggestion, if you made it flow a little more (like equal syllobals) the meaning and intensity of your emotion would come out even more!!!

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