Very lovely poem
I really like it :)
specially this part:
You walked in crowd but feels like nobody all along
"You thought you're right but people rate you wrong
You cried too hard and thought you won't be strong
I'm still here and I'm the one where you belong"
Also love the way you always end a part by saying 'i'll still be here', but always in another line, in another way :)
great job
Sarah x x

Very sweet,
i like this one alot.
keep up the great writing =)

Beautiful poem welll done

This poem is very cute. I really like your rhyming

Great Job

5/5

Aww, I loved this poem so much. It's very beautiful. My man writes things like this to me also, but you wrote it just perect. Great job. 5/5

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It was so true feelings.. i can truly understand and feels all the emotions u had put in here... very eye cathing!