I May Be Gone

I disagree, this poem makes complete sense. A lot of people confuse bad flow with other things, such as it not making sense. It does though and it has great meaning to it. I think the emotion is fair in this poem, but that's it. Maybe if you fixed up the flow a bit it'd give the emotion a better chance of being excellent. I loved the meaning of it though, you did a great job with that part. I just think the flow slows down the reading which in return slows down the brain, which in return makes you forget the sentence before you're even done with it. Therefore you're thinking that it doesn't make sense and taking it as it comes, which isn't a good thing with poetry. It needs to all go, go, go. But you have a fair poem here.

Its a great poem and while it took me a few reads to understand the meaning fully i think it is beautifully written with a good flow. i don't know if i underatood well but isn't the meaning a little sad? the contrast of the the fllowing poem and the sad meaning really works well. well done hun, keep up the good work and if you also feel sad and this poem is a manifestation of your true inner feelings then i hope you cheer up soon and i can promise that one day it'll all be better even if you don't think so now. if you ever need to talk then im here sometimes it better to talk to someoe you dont know. anyway take care and keep up the brilliant work.

Its a great poem and while it took me a few reads to understand the meaning fully i think it is beautifully written with a good flow. i don't know if i underatood well but isn't the meaning a little sad? the contrast of the the fllowing poem and the sad meaning really works well. well done hun, keep up the good work and if you also feel sad and this poem is a manifestation of your true inner feelings then i hope you cheer up soon and i can promise that one day it'll all be better even if you don't think so now. if you ever need to talk then im here sometimes it better to talk to someoe you dont know. anyway take care and keep up the brilliant work.

I liked it! It held such meaning and flow in each of the sentences. The pace was amazing with the short sentences and I thought it was quite effective. Well done *5/5*

Didn't really understand this piece. The poems seems nice though, the rhyming and structure seems a little weird 4/5