by Avrii Monrielle Oct 23, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
Title:He Doesn't Even Know |
by Shotput Girl
This was a very good poem. I enjoyed reading it and I connected with it. Very good job. I know when I'm with my boyfriend time just seems to go right on by me. |
by Weeping Wolf
Very good poem , stayed on track even though it was trying to tie in with the rhyme sceme as well, wonderful job! i deffinitly know how it feels to watch your world walk past you and into the arms of another everyday. |