First:DON'T TAKE THE GUN!!!! PUT IT DOWN!!!! second: i feel exactly the same, like I continously have to put on a smile. i love how you just continued writing--it makes the character in the poem seem broken and hopeless.

Omg hun thats so sad, But i feel that way to. Trapped in a sadness that comes with all different feeling like lonleyness,Despair an PAIN!

wishing i was dead now :(:(
...........

I know it's hard it's like everybreath feels like it's cutting you like nobody cares about you and everyone would be better off dead... well it's not true or well thats what everyone says to me...I know what it's like to want to die... or just to feel pain so you feel somthing other than numbness... Just hold on... it's gotta get better...

There is always someone in the world
who cares about you. Besinds, someone
who is mean and stupid enough to put
you down isn't worth listining to, so why
bother taking it to heart, i know it's super
hero annoying taking in all that crap life
throws at you, and no, people won't come
around and suddenly be nice one day.
but you will know forever that you were
on "the good side", and maybe you've
dont some wrong, we all have, but knowing
you tried your best in life is the best feeling
you can ever have towards yourself.

Loved your poem, so much emotion put
into it, I can relate to it, surprise, surprise
(considering what I just wrote) but if
a small loser like me can get through all
this, then so can you :P, great job, 5/5

Aww i loved this it relates to what so many people are going through

Dude thats from the corazon...and i just noticed that i never commented this poem and it was the 1st one i read...out of all ur poetry..sad but true..but i LOVE it..

O0o by the way u know i CAN SO RELATE to this poem...

I love this poem..great choice of words and everything this poems has to be a 5/5 xD

I felt that way once, not long ago actually but then i met this friend and she helped me understand somethings but its a really good poem i love the emotion

Dark and touching... <3