At first I didn't get but then I realized that it two different people's point of view. They're in the same situation experiencing the same thing but have completely different views of it. The guy seems to think it's ok and she likes it but the girl is in pain. Great job. 5/5

I had to read this twice before I figured it out but once it did. WOW so amazing one of the best poems if have seen.Good job

Yeah... agree with the other two commenters on here. Had to read it twice, but when I finally figured out what was going on, it was like.... AWESOME!!! Good Job, really!

Flawless I love it 5/5!!!!