by A l y s s a Oct 23, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
new love
Whats wrong with me? Small amounts of doubt still linger within. |
Aww. Greaqt Poem. I Have Those Feelings To. Love This One. Keep It Up. [: |
by Blissful
Loved it! The passion and love here was so evident and the imagery was flawless. Sometimes we don't want to be rushed in saying "those three little words" because we want it to be special and meaningful so take your time. |
by ABake
I like the title of this peice. It made me want to read the peice. The details of the poem are great and your word choice honostly blew me away. The only thing that really threw me off after reading was your flow. I am no expert on flow, believe me when I say that, so it might just be me. It seemed a bit choppy. Other than that great job. I loved the emotion. 5.5 |
by Alicia Jane
Aww really sweet. |
by VYXSIN
Again wow. im not really much into the love poems stuff but i made an aception with this one. again another well written poem. good work |