Comments : Those Three Little Words

  • 17 years ago

    by Angel Of Death

    Great poem 5/5 i can relate to this one.
    i love how u worded it together, keep up tha great work!
    xx love

  • 17 years ago

    by NoBeauty

    This is a good poem but it makes me feel weird coz it reminds me of an ex boyfriend lol really gud 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by mistakesR4given

    This poem was wonderful and i truly enjoyed the way you put so much passion into your work...its truly amazing

  • 17 years ago

    by VYXSIN

    Again wow. im not really much into the love poems stuff but i made an aception with this one. again another well written poem. good work

  • 17 years ago

    by Alicia Jane

    Aww really sweet.
    =]
    i like alot
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by ABake

    I like the title of this peice. It made me want to read the peice. The details of the poem are great and your word choice honostly blew me away. The only thing that really threw me off after reading was your flow. I am no expert on flow, believe me when I say that, so it might just be me. It seemed a bit choppy. Other than that great job. I loved the emotion. 5.5

    Amber.

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    Loved it! The passion and love here was so evident and the imagery was flawless. Sometimes we don't want to be rushed in saying "those three little words" because we want it to be special and meaningful so take your time.

    "At the mention of your name I can't help but smile.
    When I see your face I am entirely joyful.
    You send me spiralling with your softest touch, in your arms I feel safe."
    ^beautiful stanza.

    Well done *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah Mirabile

    Aww. Greaqt Poem. I Have Those Feelings To. Love This One. Keep It Up. [: