by Karly Oct 23, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
His a liar, |
by Bridgette
Oh yeah this ones good too you really have a talent and keep on writing cause you only get better and better |
I realy liked this poem good writing, except the 3 "but"s kind of kills it. The first "but" is good, but the other two are kind of just pushing it. |