by A l y s s a Oct 23, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
Mummy, please tell me what is wrong? |
by CWG
This poem made me cry it was so good. You are a great writer. 5/5 |
This poem and so deep and touching... its really emotional. The way it was written was soo beautiful! I loved the flow, the word choice, and the concept. Its was soo moving... 5/5 and it more than deserves it! |
by SCARECROW
I love how you used the words "mummy" and "daddy", it really placed emphasis on the love expressed through the poem, making the turnout of it all the more effective, in a bitter sense. |
And yet, another poem of yours that left me breathless. The feeling in this was so powerful. It's very well-written. Great job! |
by Emilline
Wow! thats soo, it almost made me cry! it flowed really great! i love how its someone talking to their mother, great job! |