ME toO reaD thiS 2nD parT, anD wipeD mY tearS fallinG dowN mY cheeK... nicelY writteN.... 5/5

This was sad, but vivid. The writing overall was sensational! 5/5

Wow you have got talent and its so addicting so please write more
Bridgette

The flow you use amazes me.
The heart and depth were wonderful.
I'm not sure which poem I like better.
Together, it's a masterpiece! :)

You're added to my favorites.

5/5 great job

Very nice, emotion filled piece, well done...

Wow the words are so true

Aww. i really like this one, it shows true emotions and feelings. a very good write and read.. i loved this line:
But I couldn't escape the pain of me loving you
so true.. i love it soo much! i'm going to add it to my favorites! i can't wait to read Part 2.. :o]

I can relate to this poem.
Whole piece is filled with greatly expressed emotions. You have good rhymes here, and very effective atmosphere filled with sadness.

Wow superb poem. Last line is very impressive. You have the poetic caliber and your two poems show your versatility. Keep it up and lwt me know when you write more. Love your poem

Tc
Fsams

It was ok..good flow..keep up the good work

Your Poem was amazing had so much feeling in it and so many hidden depths keep writing xxxx 5/5

Good, very good. I have been writing for along time so this is good!

Its so sad... this one made me puppy eyes!!
But its reeally good. Ur amazing.

Awwz that is sooooo cute!!! 5/5 omg i just love it but its real sad!!!

I really liked it

Wow how you describe and use ur words so carefully it was a sensational poem and very sad but overall absolutely loved it
5/5
Amazing, Beautiful Job!!!

Aww!!..this one was sad again, but i loved part 1 soooo much better!!1...great job!
Aly

Aww this is so sad. But I guess some people can totally relate. I think this poem should be broken up into smaller stanzas so that it's easier to read.. But other than that it's awesome. Great job.

WOW IF I LOVED THE 1ST 1 I SUPPER LOVE THIS ONE GREAT JOB