by The Pessimistic Peabody Oct 23, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
The stars tell lies |
"The stars tell lies |
by Timothy r
I loved the way you used different examples of lies in this piece, the flow was perfect and the last stanza was the best. Great work indeed, Tim |
I like this piece from the beginning to the end, it is greatly written with amazing and superb descriptions that created very vivid imagery. Every stanza is filled with greatly expressed emotions. |
Great poem. I really liked it. |
by JustKristina
Ohh.. i really like this one, i love the way you used the moon, sun, earth, stars and everything! wow.. it was really good keep it up :o] |