Beautiful poem! Very powerful and well written, i thoughouly enjoyed this piece! Strong use of wording and definaly a 5/5!!! Keep it up!

Ohh.. i really like this one, i love the way you used the moon, sun, earth, stars and everything! wow.. it was really good keep it up :o]

Great poem. I really liked it.

Keep writing.

5/5

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I like this piece from the beginning to the end, it is greatly written with amazing and superb descriptions that created very vivid imagery. Every stanza is filled with greatly expressed emotions.
I like the ending very much, it's very effective.
Whole poem holds so much truth and sadness.
Keep writing!
5/5 from me

I loved the way you used different examples of lies in this piece, the flow was perfect and the last stanza was the best. Great work indeed, Tim

"The stars tell lies
Advertising a place of peace
When no such place exists in the entire universe"

favorite part ^^
I thought that this was another great one by you. It flowed very well and the overall meaning was good. I like the repition of "lies" it was very good, another well deserved 5/5