by BeautifulDisaster Oct 23, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Drip drip, |
by Illusion
No doubt 5/5 |
by she
This poem told a very sad story, but it was written with so much talent |
by Ash
Excellent imagery flowing through this one and the style herein simply enhanced the pain that flowed through this poem. The beginning and ending was very different and caprtured my attention from the start till the very end. Keep it up (the writing off course - not self-harm)! 5/5 |
by Allison
Your poem was great! I loved how you used repetition and the imagery was wonderful. You have a lot of talent. *5/5* |
Wow, this poem left me speechless. It's really sad, yet very powerful. Great poem. 5/5 |