The poem in it self was well written I enjoyed how you opened it and closed the whole thing but the message in my view was a a bit self serving. Great job on the description and creating the flow though Plot121

Excellent poem. Wonderfully written. The structure was amazing. You had my attention at the start of the poem but when I got to all those lines without spaces, I got thrown off. Maybe you should put spaces in that section. I also loved the repetition in this poem; that's really effective in getting the readers attention.

Good Job! 5/5

-Shannon <3

Wow, this poem left me speechless. It's really sad, yet very powerful. Great poem. 5/5

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Your poem was great! I loved how you used repetition and the imagery was wonderful. You have a lot of talent. *5/5*

Excellent imagery flowing through this one and the style herein simply enhanced the pain that flowed through this poem. The beginning and ending was very different and caprtured my attention from the start till the very end. Keep it up (the writing off course - not self-harm)! 5/5

This poem told a very sad story, but it was written with so much talent

No doubt 5/5

the way you opened the poem
water droplets
clock time
and used them back at the end of the poem.

the spacing between lines made it more impressive.