The confusion and rythem of this poem is so real! good job!

How much do those streets remind you of the areas we live in bro?

Very nice creepy poem, I must tell you .. I much prefer your work when it's put into the standard 4 line stanzas. Seems to flow much better.

Really like this poem mate, it's eerily enjoyable.

[5/5]
~Pete.

A beautifully depicted mysticism reflects from this poem!! Really a nice job.

5/5
Take care.

Your good.
and im not sure if my paragraph thing was a poem...
but if i write whatever i did... (something else of course)

would you fix it if it wasnt good and give it back to me?
just tell me whats wrong with it or whatever
or change it

Very creepy but excellent poem, loved the way it flowed