Sleep

by gabriella   Oct 23, 2007


I find sweet serenity when
I close my eyes to sleep
it is the only place i find peace
When in the light i weep
darkness brings me joy
knowing i am not able to be found
lieng on the ground
sleep is my only hiding place
my shelter from the chaos
its the only point in time
I'm not thinking about how you tore me apart

.. this is what i got so far

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  • 16 years ago

    by Spoken Silence

    The rhyme scheme in this poem is very good I like it. Its simple but is put together in a good way.

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Amazing poem. i know how tis feels. tho, i never sleep. insomnia is terrible... (><) anywho, loved it. sweet dreams! :P

  • 16 years ago

    by Curing the Comon Cliche

    First off id like to say thank u for that comment. it was moving, deeply, im not that good of a poet, trust me. and as for this poem it was very good. altho the opposite of me. i barley sleep, lol. but its a good poem thank u for the comment, very much appreciated.