First off id like to say thank u for that comment. it was moving, deeply, im not that good of a poet, trust me. and as for this poem it was very good. altho the opposite of me. i barley sleep, lol. but its a good poem thank u for the comment, very much appreciated.

Amazing poem. i know how tis feels. tho, i never sleep. insomnia is terrible... (><) anywho, loved it. sweet dreams! :P

The rhyme scheme in this poem is very good I like it. Its simple but is put together in a good way.