Conflict

by Pete   Oct 23, 2007


It's now four solid weeks of mortars and tanks.
Trees at our back as to fortify our flanks.
Thrown it all at us, we take it all on.
Just separate soldiers, but defending as one.

Back home there'll be drinking, dancing and parties.
Living life to the fullest as their weekend is starting.
For us there's no singing or laughing, no time to relax.
A dangerous enemy awaits our forces collapse.

The platoons broken up at just holding the line,
Defending with honor, like I'm vigilant at mine.
A bombardment of shells while attacking our borders.
Yet steadfast in our mission of fulfilling our orders.

Mounting their forces as day morphs to dusk.
Driving us spare as we prepare to be pushed.
They're forcing our borders with a torturous caution.
We're taking the bait of this awful distortion.

On the enemies approach, with cordite in the air.
There's dismembered bodies and blood everywhere.
What they don't know, what we take delight in,
For us, saturday night is alright for fighting.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sourav

    A very truthful poem. This is the one reality of our lives. Nicely expressed. It's great.

  • 17 years ago

    by Fan Angeleo

    There is no business like reading good poetry, another good read for me thanks to you. Keep it up.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jackie

    Excellent poem, can take it either way, war or mad drink fuelled saturday nights

  • 17 years ago

    by xXxemzxXx

    I loved this piece its really full of emotion itz a powerfull peice of poetry i think the wording was great good work!! :) 5/5

    --emz--

  • 17 years ago

    by gack60

    Really nice work man.

    although is it about a war or this saturday when we go out! ;)

    na really tho good job, its hard to portray the struggle of a war and soilders taking part.

    you got it down to a tee mate.

    well done

    5/5

    Gary