By Candle Light

Wow...ur poems rrly do speak out to meh...<3

The imagery here was amazing! You really created a scene ion my mind with your words. Well done *5/5*

Not to bad but you should try and mix up your word choice a little more, your last poem was called a trouble teen and used that in the pome a a lot and then this one ends with the second line a troubled teen. just a thought, anyway good job again 5/5 GG23

That is so sad.....hope you're not wanting to do that! I like the poem! You painted the image in my mind...and the descriptiveness really helps you see the picture...love it! Yuo're an awesome writer!