Another Troubled Teen

by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx   Oct 23, 2007


Scars adorn her arms
Bruises cover her face
She's just another troubled teen
That's fallen from grace

Another troubled teen
With a razor in hand
She's taken and taken
All she can stand

Another troubled teen
With an alcoholic dad
With the drinking and yelling
Bruises he adds

Another troubled teen
Who's fallen apart
Another lost soul
With a lonely shattered heart

Another troubled teen
With no will to survive
She cuts and she bleeds
Longing to die

Another troubled teen
With no were to run
Hopes, dreams, and ambitions...
NONE

Another troubled teen
Fallen from grace
Scarred arms
Bruised face

-CopyRight-AmberPalmer

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  • 16 years ago

    by TillyMariex

    I love your poems!idk what to say!they leave me speechless <3

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    This touched me deeply, because I know exact feeling that you're describing here. Whole poem is greatly written, so emotional and powerful. This is one of those haunting, hard- to -forget poems.
    You did great job with rhymes, too, and created good flow in every part.
    The ending is also truly effective.
    Keep writing!

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSuicidalxx

    Reall ysad poem,,,,i liked it! Like the repition and the lfow was good to! Keep writing! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Blissful

    I loved the repitition here. The words were powerful and full of emotion. You really got your message across. Well done *5/5*

  • 17 years ago

    by ourlilsecret

    Wow...
    Like that was really good... =]]
    I really Liked it...
    Awesome Job =]]
    5/5

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