I thought the poem was pretty good, not really my topic but you did a nice job. flow was pretty good word choice too - 5/5 great job GG23

Wow...
Like that was really good... =]]
I really Liked it...
Awesome Job =]]
5/5

I loved the repitition here. The words were powerful and full of emotion. You really got your message across. Well done *5/5*

Reall ysad poem,,,,i liked it! Like the repition and the lfow was good to! Keep writing! 5/5

This touched me deeply, because I know exact feeling that you're describing here. Whole poem is greatly written, so emotional and powerful. This is one of those haunting, hard- to -forget poems.
You did great job with rhymes, too, and created good flow in every part.
The ending is also truly effective.
Keep writing!

I love your poems!idk what to say!they leave me speechless <3