by Annissha Oct 23, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
**if u read plz comment or rate and tell me what i need 2 improve on thx** |
by MissMeg
Wow this poem was beautifully written, and i found nothing wrong wit it, keep up the good work. |
I loved it:0 keep up the great work/ |
by MR F R 3 S H
You need no improvement lol....but I loved it this is 1 of my favs :-) |
by Fear2love
I like this one |
by Fsams
Very nice poem though some lines are long the flow is not intrrupted and that shows the right usage of coherent lexis. Well done 5/5 |