Beautiful poem! very well written.... 5/5

I fear I have a hard time understanding the deeper meaning of your poetry. I'd like to, but I have a hard time with it. (i'm not one for poems about sex before marriage) but anyways, you are good at longer pieces of poetry and you can capture a reader by your brilliant wording. I like that your rhymed in this piece as well. You can also speed a reader, or slow them down with the proper placement.
So I applaud you for that, and I apologize for my lack of understanding.
:)
*ME*

Sorry it has taken me so long . I feel terrible . Lol . But here goes another comment . I loved this title ; Because sometimes when you love someone or feel strongly towards them , you see them in a different lite [ Off Topic So Lets Get To Commenting ]

First : I must say , your words really captivated me in this first stanza ; There is a hint of sarcasm , but it is a lovely sarcasm . I don ' t know how to describe it . But your words . And the story and meaning behind it all just amazes me . You take such a simple emotion and turn it into something beautiful ; I like the way you set the actual stanza up , but one suggestion -- punctuation [ could ] of been added . But we all know , I am a freak about that . Other than that , great opening .

Second : I liked this stanza . But I feel like a few of your words or even lines could be switched up to make a tad more sense . Hmm . Can ' t really pinpoint any particular one , but you get what I am saying . Anyways , I must say I love the third line . Agh . Beautiful . Another thing , it bugs me , is that your lines flow so smoothly and then you do a long line and the flow kind of cuts off . Not in every case though . Just one in this stanza . Also , the repetition of " all in my head " was okay once , but twice . Erm . It adds a little more effect , but at the same time I don ' t know about it . Lol .

Third : I will just sum up the rest of the piece . Hmm . I liked it . The whole night scene is in there and that just screams love . Lol . It also sets a storyline and you continued with it in an amazing way ; The way your lines are worded , kind of got on my nerves at first but now it makes sense . They are complex but in a beautiful way ; Just like the subject of the whole poem . So overall , there were minor issues but still a great piece . I personally liked it because it reminds me of my own style .

So great job hun . Sorry if this one was not as long as the others :[ 5 . 5

Amber .